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		<title>King as Moral Center</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 22 Dec 2007 10:50:29 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Paul Hackett</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Elaborating on my discussion of the moral center in films&#8230; “The first casualty of war is innocence.” That’s the tagline for Oliver Stone’s Platoon (1986), a film that’s different from other Viet Nam war stories because it’s not about two countries fighting each other. Rather, it’s a story about a country at war with itself. [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><em>Elaborating on my discussion of <a title="The Moral Center" href="http://www.paulhackett.ca/2007/12/09/the-moral-center/">the moral center in films</a>&#8230;</em></p>
<p><img style="float: right; margin-left: 20px" src="http://www.paulhackett.ca/wp-content/uploads/2007/12/platoon.jpg" alt="King and Chris in Platoon" />“The first casualty of war is innocence.” That’s the tagline for Oliver Stone’s <em>Platoon</em> (1986), a film that’s different from other Viet Nam war stories because it’s not about two countries fighting each other. Rather, it’s a story about a country at war with itself. Although the story centers on the thoughts and fears of one soldier, everyone in the platoon faces similar moral choices, and must decide for themselves what is right and wrong.</p>
<p>The men in Chris Taylor’s (Charlie Sheen) platoon divide into two groups: the heavy drinkers loyal to Barnes (Tom Berenger) and the pot smokers who follow Elias (Willem Dafoe). The main difference between them is that Elias already believes the war can’t be won, but keeps fighting in it with honor. The audience roots for him because he’s a moral compass and mentor to the liberal minded members of the platoon. Barnes and his men, however, have a different take on the war. They lash out at the Vietnamese and each other; committing atrocities that turn them into the real bad guys.</p>
<p>With a story as multi-layered as this, it’s not surprising to find a moral center &#8211; someone who voices the author’s perspective. The moral center steers the theme, so that is not about surviving war, but surviving war with humanity still intact. The moral center of <em>Platoon</em> is King (Keith David), introduced early in the script:</p>
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<li class="action">KING looks like a king. A lion of a black man but with a sleepy, gentle face, not to be roused, is painfully trying to scrawl a letter home with the pencil held awkwardly, mouthing the words.</li>
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<p>He has many of the film’s key lines and entertains the platoon with his home-spun wisdom and sense of humor.</p>
<p>King wonders how an educated man like Chris wound up in Viet Nam. The boy’s idealistic view of the war makes him laugh. He calls Chris a crusader for thinking dropping out of school and signing up would make a difference. (Stone reportedly dropped out of Yale twice and based <em>Platoon</em> on his own experiences serving in Viet Nam.)</p>
<p>After the hero survives an injury, King &#8211; whose very name is symbolic &#8211; accepts him as part of the group. He takes Chris under his wing, shrugging off the possibility that he might have let the platoon down. King tells him there is “no such thing here as a coward,” a line that he repeats later in the film.</p>
<p>As an ally, King introduces Chris to the “head,” an underground world where Elias’ crew smoke pot and escape the war. He gets Chris high for the first time, which not only relieves the pain of his injury, but initiates him into the underworld. The symbolism of this occasion isn’t lost on King:</p>
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<li class="character">KING</li>
<li class="parenthetical">(smiling)</li>
<li class="dialogue">This ain&#8217;t Taylor. Taylor been shot. This man Chris been resurrected&#8230;</li>
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<p>King is not the only moral guide in <em>Platoon</em>. The Christ like figure Elias is another strong force of good and the focal point of Chris’ admiration.</p>
<p>In my mind, the moral center is generally a less active participant in the story and more of an observer. Elias plays a big part; staying very involved in the plot. He helps the men prepare for missions and teaches them what he can about survival. When faced with difficult tasks he crusades for good. King is more of a witness and commentator on the action. His actions never influence the direction of the story.</p>
<p>When the platoon suspects that Barnes actually killed Elias they talk about getting revenge. Barnes turns up drunk and challenges them, giving them a chance to get even.</p>
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<li class="action">King, the biggest one there, is about to say something, but the moment passes.</li>
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<p>He knows that an eye for an eye is not justice; and remains an observer. As an observer King is also the only that notices Chris isn’t writing home anymore. In case the audience hasn’t noticed Chris’ transformation, King is there to point it out.</p>
<p>We don’t know what happens to Chris and the other members of the platoon at the end. King makes it out alive before the final battle and he gives Chris some final advice:</p>
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<li class="character">KING</li>
<li class="dialogue">Make it outta here, it&#8217;s all gravy, every day of the rest of your life man &#8211; gravy.</li>
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<p>If anything, this is the delivery of the film’s real message. War is a terrible experience for everyone involved. Surviving it is one thing, but surviving it and still remaining human is another.</p>
<p>For King, to have another chance at life, and to live life to the fullest, every day is gravy. It’s an extra gift that is worth staying alive for.</p>
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		<title>The Moral Center</title>
		<link>http://www.paulhackett.ca/2007/12/09/the-moral-center/</link>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Dec 2007 12:56:53 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Paul Hackett</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[In most American films, the moral high ground is the domain of the hero. To conquer the villain he has to undergo some sort of change within himself. A general template for this transformation might be overcoming selfishness and putting the needs of others ahead of his own. Through his apprenticeship and growth, the hero [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In most American films, the moral high ground is the domain of the hero. To conquer the villain he has to undergo some sort of change within himself. A general template for this transformation might be overcoming selfishness and putting the needs of others ahead of his own. Through his apprenticeship and growth, the hero learns something essential that will allow him to defeat the villain.</p>
<p>I’ve found that many screenplays contain a special character type that is somewhere between a stock character and an archetypal character. This figure is someone who will help the hero on his journey, and I call him or her: the <em>moral center</em>. It’s possible that the moral center also doubles as one of the archetypal roles such as the <em>mentor</em> or <em>shapeshifter</em>. This may be less common though, otherwise all stories would have moral centers and I don’t think that’s the case.</p>
<p>Aside from helping the hero in some small way, the true job of the moral center is to introduce the film’s <strong>theme</strong>, and clue us in to what the movie is all about. The voice of the moral center illustrates the writer’s perspective.</p>
<p>While the hero may be the moral compass of the film &#8211; the one who will strive to right the wrongs and reestablish the status quo &#8211; he is never the moral center. The hero is too busy with his quest, battling the villain, driving the story forward and facing obstacles. As the audience roots for him, he will make a series of choices &#8211; some of them will turn out to be right, others wrong. If he were also the story’s moral center, the film would assume a tone of preaching, and be of little interest to most audiences.</p>
<p>The moral center is almost always a minor character; someone often allied with the hero, but corrupted neither by him nor the villain. He brings to the story a voice of wisdom; shedding light on what the story is really about. With a few key lines, this enlightened individual will represent understanding and insight in a nearly godlike way.</p>
<p>If you really want to know who the moral center is: <em>he&#8217;s the one dude in the film that you’d really want to hang out with</em>.</p>
<p>I’ll elaborate more on the moral center in my next post with a few examples from popular films.</p>
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		<title>On Writing in General</title>
		<link>http://www.paulhackett.ca/2007/10/10/on-writing-in-general/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Oct 2007 04:41:06 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Paul Hackett</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Whether we admit it or not, a lot of us wannabe screenwriters with blogs are in awe of John August. He is to screenwriting what Robert Plant is to singing, or Humphrey Bogart to acting: one of those artists that possesses a complete understanding and awareness of his own abilities. John has posted to his [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Whether we admit it or not, a lot of us wannabe screenwriters with blogs are in awe of <a href="http://johnaugust.com" title="John August" rel="external">John August</a>. He is to screenwriting what Robert Plant is to singing, or Humphrey Bogart to acting: one of those artists that possesses a complete understanding and awareness of his own abilities.</p>
<p>John has posted to his site the text of a recent speech he gave at Drake University, <a href="http://johnaugust.com/archives/2007/writing-digital-age" title="The Challenge of Writing in a Digital Age" rel="external">The Challenge of Writing in a Digital Age</a>. Sometimes all it  takes is an expert to say something obvious for it to resonate clearly. John offers up the following definition:</p>
<blockquote><p>Writing is how we demonstrate that we understand something.</p></blockquote>
<p>For the screenwriter that means your story. If you&#8217;re going to write a movie you should have something important to say. You can&#8217;t tell a good story if you don&#8217;t understand it yourself. A good script should adhere to a certain structure and follow a logical plan. There are as many books as there are blogs on screenwriting, but real insight and understanding only comes through hard work. This is the day to day routine of writing.</p>
<p>This applies equally to other kinds of writing. A songwriter needs to understand the mechanics of emotion. Songs may tell stories too, but if anything, the true purpose of music is to stir an emotional response. What remains true to all kinds writing is not only what you say, but how you say it. As John said at the end of his speech, we should all write like our lives depend on it.</p>
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